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Six Word Stories Submission

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Last November, she was completely mine.
The idea is to write a six word story omitting entirely one vowel.


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3wyl's avatar
Ooh... o.O

This is quite a poignant piece, especially with what it is suggesting. I like the phrasing and how you've emphasised the concept of time and how... I don't know. I do feel a sense of oppression, I have to say, or complete dominance, and it's hard to imagine and envision that, you know?

Great stuff. :nod: